Friday, April 18, 2008

rhymes rhymes

i've been trying to do some rhyming. i always thought it was hard but it's SOOOOO MUCH FUN it's almost addictive. i keep rhyming in my head but when i try to write it down, all the rhyming just goes god knows where. but i managed to write down a few anyway. it's not that good but here it goes.

Go hover and holler
Don't make me grab your collar
i'm sure you know best
that i'm not ready to F
look back in the past
for one second if ever
oh wait i just recalled
you're way too bold
you hate looking back
at all those seemfully trail-less track
and here i am making rhymes
in my mind it chimes
forgive and forget
and don't ever regret
for all is done
i had so much fun
i know i'll have more
an eternal galore
i'm coming i'm coming
don't stop the singing

I like this one better though. it's only 4 lines. i'll try to continue it slowly soon.

Gosh, you are so gullible
Must i spell out every syllable?
Isn't it all so obvious?
and yes, this is getting hideous

i'll be posting more. don't get bored. oh and to all angkatan 2008 seluruh indonesia. WE CAN MAKE IT! LULUS LULUS!!!

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